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I wrote this poem a few years ago. Judgment Halls Middle School halls are where it begins. Spreading gossip and lies, Where everyone loses and no one wins. Where we just toss each other into social bins. Somewhere in a bathroom a young girl cries, Middle School halls are where it begins. The place where we make most all of our sins. Only designer the most popular girl buys. Everyone loses and no one wins. Those who follow trends all look like twins. By way of expressing ourselves, these clothes only disguise. Middle school halls are where it begins. Lots of popular girls with their smirks and mean grins. You too embarrassed to even meet their eyes. Everyone loses and no one wins. Middle school is where a lot of people try to be “in.” That girl losing self-respect every time she tries. Middle school halls are where it begins. Where everyone loses and no one wins.

Public Comments

1. good job and it's so true.
2. Great poem! I haven't been in grade school for 30 years, I am soey nothing has changed!
3. Thats Sick!(cool) I'm in middle and thats something i can relate too.
4. its pretty good :D
5. It needs a little bit of tightening, and some of the meter needs to be smoothed out, but you have some really good lines in here--really good. I liked your poem.
6. This is an excellant poem and this is very true it describes how lies and gossip can hurt other people, that makes people cry along with deception no matter how long. You did an awesome job writing this
7. oh yeah middle school sucked but this poem didn't
8. good poem
9. Very poignant. Deep.