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can you write a descriptive paragraph about "your dream house"?

ok, i did mine, but it needs some editting, could somebody help me? MY DREAM HOUSE: When you first enter the enormous house from the front door, which was yellow-colored with gilded flowery designs, you will get in an impressive spacious living room with large glass windows, surrounded by pretty large curtains making the scene uniquely nice. A small purple sofa is put facing the window. A huge modern TV was placed by the wall, and you can find speakers in every corner of the room. There’s another purple sofa with pillows stitched “home sweet home” in front of the TV. A beautiful fireplace is put in the room to make it look warm. There are monumental picture frames, very vivid to be seen, all were placed beside each other nicely. The kitchen is a picturesque, a beautiful eating table made of glass is placed in the center, and chairs covered with white leather. As you go upstairs you will find the bedroom made in a white-pink combination. The walls and the floor are white, and the bed and curtains, as well as some decorations are pink, which gives the room a special touch. There’s a door which leads to the dressing room, a room that’s filled with different types of clothes and shoes, there’s also a big mirror with lights which made the room look like a fashion show stage.

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2. When you first enter the enormous house from the front door, which is yellow-colored with gilded flowery designs, you will be in an impressive, spacious living room with large glass windows. The windows are draped by large, pretty curtains, making the scene uniquely nice. A small purple sofa faces the window. A huge, modern TV sits against the wall, with speakers in each corner to create the surround-sound effect. Another purple sofa, dressed with pillows embroidered with "Home Sweet Home," is situated in front of the TV. A beautiful fireplace fills the room with warmth, not just from the cheery fire, but from the ruddy stones of the mantle. Above the mantle, large brightly colored picture frames add a color accent. The kitchen is picturesque. A beautiful dining table made of glass is placed in the center, surrounded by chairs covered with white leather. As you go upstairs you will find the bedroom decorated in a shades of pink and white. The walls and the floor are white, and the bed and curtains, as well as some decorations are pink, which gives the room a special touch. There’s a door which leads to the dressing room, a room that’s filled with different types of clothes and shoes. There’s also a big mirror with lights which make the room look like a fashion show stage.