Natwerk Designs

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Landri is a board game with a game play mechanic based on the players diplomatic negotiating skills and coming up with creative useful strategies on how to boost their own financial economies and even defeating other players militarily. There are countless ways players can implement their own strategies however they choose, weather they wish to use tactful diplomacy getting on other players good sides or to force them into co-operation through military means. Playing time can very significantly however the game is usually paused or ends when all the players have come to mutual agreement. When playing each player keeps track of their own progress using specially designed paper sheets, so if the game is paused it can easily be picked up and resumed again at a later time or day. Landri does not have dice or any other objects that interject luck into the game play whatsoever. In all honesty this game is not for everyone, and is aimed toward the more intellectual hard core board game player and may not be best suited for players looking for a quick and easy finish. It's important while playing the game that the majority of players fully know and understand the rules to have as little confusion as possible while helping other players learn how to play. The rules at first glance can possibly seem a little complicated but once you have them down the game is actually quite easy to play and is excellent for anyone who enjoys fun board games with in depth strategy and conflict. fiiix it pleease! lol

Public Comments

1. no its just perfect !!!!!!!!!!!!!
2. Spelling seems to be good but you have a couple run on sentences. You need to add commas. You should go to a tutor at school and ask them to revise it
3. Your question should be " Are there grammatical mistakes in this statement what need fixed?"
4. Landri is a board game with a game play mechanic based on the players diplomatic negotiating skills and requires players to come up with creative and useful strategies on how to boost their own financial economies, even defeating other players militarily. There are countless ways in which players can choose to implement their own strategies, WHETHER they wish to use tactful diplomacy (getting on other players good sides or attempt to force them into co-operation through military means). Playing time can VARY significantly, however the game is usually paused or ends when all of the players have come to a mutual agreement. When playing, each player keeps track of their own progress using specially designed paper sheets, so if the game is paused it can easily be picked up and resumed again at a later time or day. Landri does not have dice or any other objects that interject luck into the game play whatsoever. In all honesty this game is not for everyone, and is aimed toward the more intellectual hard core board game player and may not be best suited for players looking for a quick and easy finish. It's important while playing the game that the majority of players fully know and understand the rules to have as little confusion as possible while helping other players learn how to play. The rules at first glance can possibly seem a little complicated, but once you have them down the game is actually quite easy to play and is excellent for anyone who enjoys fun board games with in depth strategy and conflict.
5. Yes.. Just a few player's diplomatic negotiating skills (the apostrophe is important) Whether, not weather other players' good sides (apostrophe) "Vary" not very significantly