Natwerk Designs

What do you thing of this book?

Is a two point of view paper please be honest! Lucky Charm In the middle of winter, I was still in the rectangular cardboard box. I was made last week, and a brand new kind too. I am size eleven, and my colors where midnight black, and snow white. My kind was very popular, but somehow I was still in the store. By early April a woman with light brown hair, and really tan skin bought me. She looked like she was in her early forties or late thirties. By that I knew that she was going to send me to her son. The ride was long and I could not see much from the little hole of the box. A few minutes later we were in front of a house, which was pasty, with the doors, windows, and the garage door ginger. The inside of the house was in extremely neat, and amazedly cool. When you enter everything is in an old Japanese and Chinese style, The Kitchen is modern, but the ones that you see in a Hollywood house design by professionals. The Dining Room is style just like the Kitchen. The Living Room was awesome, made me feel like I was in Africa. The room is decorated excellently that it’s impossible not to want the room for your own. The mother started to walk up the brown spiral stairs. At first I thought she was going to stop in the second floor, but she kept going up until we stop at the Attic. The Attic was pretty big, and the style was skater with punk and rocker kind. The room had a small living room in the middle of the room with a plasma TV. The far right corner was a half circle, with the wall as a big window. There was also a king size round bed that fit perfectly against the wall. In the other right corner there was a walk-in closet, while at the far left corner there was a bathroom which was being used by my soon to be owner. “Shane, can you hurry up in there! I got something to show you,” sang the mother with happiness in her eyes. From the bathroom door a strong, but light voice shouted, “I am kind of busy using the toilet right know, if you haven’t notice.” “I don’t care you get your butt out here right now!” “No!” … “I bought you something form DVS.” … FLUSH! The door opened so fast that I thought it was going to break. “What did you buy me?” Questioned a light, yet dark long shaggy brunette hair guy, with tight black jeans, and neon green Vans. He had no shirt on, so you could see his built, yet small muscles. He was really skinny, but had enough meat on him to not make him look anorexic. His height was about “5’9, and had a perfectly looking face with sky blue eyes to match. Looking at him made something in me click, and I realize that this guy, I mean Shane, was from now on my owner. “I bought you a Lucky Charm,” answered his mom. “Ma, that it’s sick! I mean awesome! You are the best!” sang Shane with the same happiness in his eyes like his moms. “Here take it, “ sighed his mom while handing me over to Shane, “I got to do you and Rikku’s dirty dishes.” “ Ah! Come on Ma they are not that bad,” lied Shane. “For you, yeah caused you don’t have to do them!” “Sorry Ma, but my hands are not good with that.” “Spoiled little brat,” muttered his mom while she went down stairs. When is mom was out of view, Shane opens the box and asked, “Hey Lucky Charm, ready to do some skateboarding?” ~#&#@$~ It was raining like crazy, and I was in a terrible mood, of course Shane notices which got us in this conversation. “Come on Luc, its not that bad,” pleaded Shane. Ha! Have you seen how muddy it is, and I sure as hell not going to be bathing in that. Shane could still see how mad I was. “Come on, man it’s not that far away. The house is only half a mile away from here. Besides it’s not going to be that bad. You know you have been through worst.” Why did we have to come to the stake park in a nasty day like this? However, when he said that I knew he meant the time that we where hiking in south entrance to the Grand Canyon National Park, which is very close to are home town Tusayan. While we were hiking my shoelaces got stuck in a branch that unfortunately was very thick. Shane didn’t notice so he kept walking which made my shoelaces break, and now they are tied up to keep them together. Also one of my aglets is missing, and the shoelaces look really worn out. He also means the time that he was running from the cops because he graffiti, “JOKER” on the 1:00 A.M. train. The bottom of me couldn’t take the running so it got worn out and rip in the bottom back from a nail in the train tracks. Certainly he also means the time he got Rikku very mad, he was making fun of her new anime Goth style dress, so Rikku, his little sister, scratch the inside back of me to make a small hole. Out of all this I new something, Shane was with all his heart sorry for me. Remembering all of that made me sight, and let Shane run with me to cross the small distance from the skate park and on to his backyard to his house. When we got inside

Public Comments

1. what the...... ok I get what you're going for, I had to do the same thing (I was given a picture of a doll and told to write what the pic said to me). A doll is much easier.... the shoe thing is just confusing. Why would a shoe know about interior decorating??? You give WAY to much detail, just about all of it is unnecessary. From the little window of my box I could see a house. Inside were colors and a feeling of warmth I had never experienced perched on the shelf of DVS. That's all you need for the house. The last pharagraph is confusing and muddled, like you wrote it while high on crack. It's nice that you added the destruction of the shoes but you need to be more concise. I know it's stupid but you have to think like a shoe would. Alone, wanting to run around and have fun. Wanting someone to keep warm and protected. Think of the shoes like it was a dog at the pound lol. Good luck.