Natwerk Designs

Is my text correct please?

I am French, could you help me please to improve this text? "The development of the amateurs stimulates the industry of the cameras and significant surfaces and supports the innovations. The trade and the craft industry related to the portrait are not touched yet, quite to the contrary, the photographers of district taking care of work of laboratory of the amateurs. New businesses of amateurs are constituted." Thank you !

Public Comments

1. That looks, good to me, if you are still developing your English this is great.
2. i am sorry, but i have tried to re-write this so that it makes easier reading, but i think my lack of knowledge in cameras is making it very difficult because i really don't understand it. if no one else writes to help you , please re-post it with more text so that i can get more of an idea of what you are talking about.
3. You have too many 'of's in the second sentence - but other than that it's pretty great! i mean seriously, i know people who are ENGLISH and probably wouldn't understand what your going on about!! You put chavs to shame - not that they care! - but good on ya! :D