Natwerk Designs

Rate My Lyrics 1-10.?

I never post lyrics for the morning folks. So here is some, rate 1-10. i live to die, die to live i construct bars for the foundation for my crib no matter what, i try to do whats best for my future kids in the creed of the so called pipe dreams extractin whispers also called the underwater screams influence the next emcee illuminatin under a light beam street teacher teachin street philosophy not the streets based on color schemes but the work of present day deities cuz u see that blue and red sh1t really bothers me terrotorial accusations leadin to altercations leaves me in amazement, so im locked in the basement workin my way up bar by bar building the frame until the roof is up shielding me from the rain fightin off the plugs tryin to impeach the brain Day to day struggle tryin to keep the status on sane i read and inspect peoples minds and find contradictory designs speak visionary rhymes tryin to impose knowledge to those who are blind to these drastic times instead of grippin on a 9 milimeter i water my grass until its greener Sit back in school study at home nobody knows what i know about the destruction of the world the boulder between the shoulders is covered in mold the prophecy has been told all yall sold your soul Only 21 years old already im feelin the cold Eyes looking into my own dont see the beast thats grown into the epitome of superior darkness i need a spark to disembark these heartless demons

Public Comments

1. 7.5 and I am not usually a morning folk lol but i have to help make thanksgiving food.
2. 10/10 Excellent Just 1 Tip: Try to add a brand name in there like Nike, Adidas, Reeboks but thats a personal choice. I think it makes the song more exciting.
3. 9.5/10 great work keep it up
4. On a scale from 1 -10 ...20
5. dont get me wrong ok...dont use so much strong words ok...because you want people to understand your lyrics...i understand but they might not..here's another thing dont sound upset...now let me rate you ...i give you a 9 ok
6. Rap? Its more like a poem but it was good 7/10
7. 8/10 The best verse I have seen on Y!A this month, keep it up that was amazing. Edit: after reading it twice I Give you 10/10.
8. 8, it's pretty cool
9. 9/10 for a visual appearence, lyrics have some meaning in them, You help to whipe away the average "Soulja Boy" hip hop stereotype. But I need to hear a just ass good verbal appearence to give it a 10, delivery can be just as important as the content.
10. the second verse is better than the first imo. it might sound better over a beat or if i heard it rather than just reading it. but it seems good. i would give it about a 6 or 7 from reading it.
11. 9
12. Good. I give it a 9.5...you on that deep, contemplative stuff. Rate mine? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20081127105137AAEeuIX&r=w
13. 8 outta 10 good drop,....it's been a while since I've been on here. glad to see your still droppin.
14. wow. this is actually the first rap i've ever seen on Y!A thats actually good. i would give that a 9 out of 10 no problem. you're not talking about bittches money and guns like all of these internet gangsters. i liked the imagery, the 'constructing bars' theme, and you had some pretty good rhyme schemes, i liked the overall flow if it. keep writing, do you have anything recorded, like a myspace or anything?
15. 9.That was really good. it has a lot of meaning behind it. madd hott. keep rapping.
16. i give it a 9.9