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How's This Rap i Made " Who Am I"?

I should do it and regret it, not regret I never did it/ Never finished what I started, and Im sorry, I admit it/ Theres some women, who act like Im a star how Im livin/ Who'm I kiddin, Im just tryin to make a livin, Im hidden/ Stay behind all these rhymes that I write/ Feelin comfort in the dark, who am I in the light/ Try to find what im like, when behind on a mic/ Or in the "lime" light like designs on a sprite/ I try to forget things, the troubles encountered/ Today will the past in a couple of hours/ Im livin proof, you don't need muscle to power/ Who am I? Im a rapper with a must to devour/ And I'm...thinkin what my school said, keep a cool head/ I did, now Im holdin more ho's than a tool shed/ Tryna get full, coppin bread, Im a fool/ Who am I? big truck wit the weight that I pull/ They used to say if I don't get a scholarship/ I'll never make the cash that a baller is/ And if you don't got dough you don't matter kid/ I made em' think out the box like Hadda did/ (Mad Hadda is a radio host on 97.9 The Box) Verbal murder when Im bustin the rhyme off/ The slug leave a trail like the bug on a side walk/ So who am I? am I killer on the street? NO!/ My speech let em know Im a killer on the beats though/ ...Beast mode, how I look beside you/ If I "front" why I always get put behind you?/ Im real, you shouldn't have to look deep to find you/ And if you do, maybe you should let the beat remind you/ ...The music flows smoothly, soothing my mind/ And I don't use "crack" for a "groove" and its mine/ What should I prove? cuz I know Im the man/ I'll never lose, big plans, cuz I know who I am/ qwerty I Didn't Delete it It Was The Yahoo Mods

Public Comments

I think it's great! ♥
Yes. Its perfecto! Your a damn genius! Now put it in with some sound.
damn man that was tight
THAT CHIT WAS TITE YOU TOOK YOUR TIME HUH YEAH PROPS FOR YOU
nice wordplay, how long this take you to write up? I don't think anything in it is over one syllable, some of the rhymes are simple, but not a bad debut..
it's great. please answer my question about if rap has affect on the community since your a hip hop head. I would really appreaciate answers from people who like hip pop and not rap. Thanks
Thats whats up
WOW. DO YOU WANT ME TO CALL YOU A PRODUCER DO YOU WANT DRE ? LOL.
all i gotta say iz yeeeeaaaa esco..lyrically inclined
Godddamnn thats f*ckn ILL "The slug leave a trail.." Love that line, I like how you didn't focus only on punchlines and actually had hard-hitting lyrics, i can learn a lot from you keep it up, homie
man of man dam i am better than most these stupid mothafu<kas a veteran a better plan "yes i can" life is playing you suckas straight wise man don't get suprised man dat anyone can rhyme man
That was great. Keep it up
Very very good rap, but why'd you delete that diss to Evil? I had a response I wrote, but since you deleted it my response is lost forever.
I can amagine the flow in my head...that was slick, kid...Keep up the good work...Dont forget to let me and FredMS do a track for you on your album...being optimistic that you will become a STAR...lol thats real baby...STAY FOCUSED
That was real good! A couple of ur lines made me laugh a lil! And I like these ones: "Feelin comfort in the dark, who am I in the light" "now Im holdin more ho's than a tool shed"\ "So who am I? am I killer on the street? NO!/ My speech let em know Im a killer on the beats though" "Im real, you shouldn't have to look deep to find you" "I'll never lose, big plans, cuz I know who I am/" Those were my fav lines, and i love how ya ended it Pretty tight! :D
man that sh*t was off the chains u gooder than most people i kno and some of these wack a$$ rappers