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can any one tell me IF the essay i wrote is descriptive??? please help ASAP! PLEASE ;D?

My best friend It was back in my old school. The February air held its warmth as I looked toward years of school to begin. I was impatient for it to start over again. Because I had everything ready including new books and all the needed school utensils. Almost every kids were returning back from their vacation with their parents and expressed sadden look in each faces when kids departed form their parents. Some were every crying. My old school is boarding school were strictly followed by rules and regulation. Looking around the school’s surrounding, it is surrounded by mountains and fields in every corner. In a soccer field, I saw a group of little boys fighting over a ball. Several kids were chitchatting with newcomers and enjoying. The view of the school reminds me of a beautiful scenery picture that seen on mostly many frame. I left my heavy suitcase near my assigned bed and wandered through the dorm room. As I looked out from the window, I deliberately counted the dorm rooms. There were dozens of dorm room. Each has two floor, 1 warden and about 40 kids shared each dorm room. The lower floor has kitchen, several bathroom, big dinning room and most importantly a little praying room. The upper floor just has 4 bedrooms. As that day almost ended, my warden gathered all the roommates and assigned our bed. That was the day I first met my best friend. We were similar in many ways. My warden put us together in same bedroom with other several girls. That night strange feeling overcome in all around us. We do not tend to talk at first. But as the next days came, my warden divided chores for each and everyone. Anyone i appreciate if u help! :D thank you... thank you...> and please! please don't make fun of my writing because i know i suck at writing and any grammer errors i made.

Public Comments

1. yes it is descriptive