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Can someone help me to convert this text into diary writing?

I arrived at hill house, very vast front garden with a very modern architecture extremely welcoming at first view. At the reception the service was prompt and efficient very friendly to. Mrs Woods, the owner of the hotel was very helpful. The hotel service was very motivated in the satisfaction of the clients. I waited no more than a few minutes to get my room. I got escorted by Mrs woods who was telling me about the history of this hotel but also how the hotel worked what time breakfast was served for example and everything else that was helpful and that I needed to know. The room was spacious clean and bright, the beds where very comfortable. I found the bed fabric very soft. I took a look in the bathroom, very clean to, modern design and nice sized bathtub. Formidable view from the balcony. As for room service, at whatever time the wear always prompt and efficient. No time to get bored as much activities was on offer in the hotel, for all ages. After a good sleep and wonderful day of excitement and fun I woke up to a marvellous continental breakfast, with varieties of choices to choose from again the breakfast restaurant was sensationally vast lovely decoration. This hotel was perfectly organised to me. I was very pleased only thing would of rather missed on was leaving the hotel after breakfast. I shall defiantly go back soon. Well in formal diary form ...

Public Comments

1. I think your diary should be personal. Write it as you like.
2. It's OK to be written to a diary. How do you want to do it?? Exept that you could begin it with : Dear Diary...
3. That might be a bit too formal (there is no such thing as 'formal diary form'). The personal tone is right but some of it just appears a little bit too old-fashioned and formal. For example, "I shall definitely go back soon" could be "I'd go there again". If this is for something that is going to have to be submitted to a teacher or lecturer than I think it's fine as it is. I assumed you mean 'definitely' instead of 'defiantly' but that's it.