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~My Condo I lived in a modernization two-bedroom apartment for two years. In the family room, I had a big aquarium. I had a wall unit that included book shelves. There was a comfortable sofa, a plasma television, under television table was a Sony DVD player, to west word wall was the computer, and other different items. There were pictures and a big map of the world on the wall of my bedroom. The kitchen in my apartment had a TV, a dinette table to the north-west wall, a microwave oven was hung below the top of the drawers , a blender, a toaster, and a juicer. Each room in my apartment was well lay-out, Also, from the family room windows, you were able to see our gorgeous swimming pool. It was 60 meters long and filled with blue water. As you can see from the above condo description I lived in a modern, well designed, and organized home. fix any possible errors you see. thank you.

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1. I lived in a modern two-bedroom apartment for two years. I had a big aquarium in.the family room. I had a wall unit that included bookshelves. There was a comfortable sofa. I had a plasma television and a Sony DVD player on a stand. On the west wall were a computer and other items. On my bedroom wall were pictures and a big map of the world. The kitchen had a TV and along the northwest wall, a dinette table. There was a built-in microwave oven, a juicer, a blender, and a toaster. Each room in my apartment was well laid out. From the family room windows, you could see our gorgeous swimming pool. It was 60 meters long and painted blue. As you can see, I lived in a modern, well-designed, organized home. I'm guessing that the microwave was built-in. If not, simply delete "built-in." And I'm hoping that the water in the pool wasn't actually blue. If your point about the apartment is that it was old but modernized, change my "modern" to "modernized." "Modernization" is a noun. "Modernized" means that it has been updated. "Modern," an adjective, means that it is up-to-date, but it could have been modernized or it could have simply been new.