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is Premier bathrooms reliable? i want a walk in bathtub so badly, but i want a compact one. the only small one i could find is this one. http://www.premier-bathrooms.com/walk-in-baths/compact-walk-in-baths/cove-walk-in-bathtub.shtml ive heard many complaints that Premier Bathrooms is unreliable and a scam. is that true? if it is, do you know where i can find a walk in bath the same size as the one in the link? (please give me the link if you have info) thanks

How much, ball park, would it cost to remove a premier bathroom spa and put in a basic bathtub?

Premier kitchens Peterborough? Has anyone in the Peterborough area had problems with "Premier Kitchens and bathrooms" ? I would be interested to hear as I have just had a rather shocking experience with this Company who for some reason don't seem to have any regard for their standards of work or customer satisfaction once you have signed a contract with them.

How to stay up really late? So I'm going to the Harry Potter midnight premier (:D) but I'm used to going to bed at about 11, so I need a way to stay up till about 2 or 3ish without having to run to the bathroom every 5 seconds. Thanks so much!

Has anyone stayed at the newly remodeled Stratosphere Hotel in Vegas in the Premier Tower rooms? The rooms that were newly remodeled in 2008.....I was just wondering how they look and if the bathroom looks new also.....and did you have 1 bed or 2 ?? thank you for your help. I've seen the pics online but does it really look like that, I would like someone who actually has stayed there recently since the 2008 remodel, as the hotel claims they just did the rooms over last year and in 2005, but I'm wondering about the 2008 remodeled rooms. thank you again.

I need manufacturing facility of very high quality solid brass bathroom / plumbing parts like faucets parts? pressure balance handles, shower assemblies etc. I particularly wouldn't consider huge quantities but medium and small like 200 pcs. 100 pcs. etc. But the quality has to be very high for using in premier hotels. Do you know any such company...........?

What do i do about face book? I left, deleted it yesterday. I don't know why but. My family on there we're ignoring me. I don't know. What i did wrong. I felt crappy and depressed on there. If i did go back. Id have to take a break a month away from it because in august. Im away on holiday and. When i come back. Im away again to the premier inn so men can work on our new bathroom. Should i still leave or give it another chance? I dont know. What to do

Show "House" In Politics, Did You See It? Did you see the bumper sticker in last nights season premier of "house" when in the bathroom scene there was a bumper sticker hanging on the wall behind them, it was black and red, said "change 08". Wonder who paid for this plug ......

How can I translate this into french? plz native french speakers only, no internet translations, they are not accurate Crown Pointe Lodge and Golf Club Built on the edge of a stunning 4-star golf course, Crown Pointe Links (our newest Summer Bay property) is designed to offer memorable views as well as luxury accommodations. Whether your balcony overlooks manicured greens or picturesque meadows, in this peaceful setting (where birdsong fills the air, with an occasional “moo” sounding faintly from some distant pasture) it’s hard to believe that the urban attractions of St. Louis lie just one hour away. Fill your days with golf, shopping, museums and sightseeing. Swim, scuba dive, hike, fish or boat. Whether on horseback, or in an off-road vehicle, you’ll find miles of trail to explore. Theater, sport, history, art -- it’s all nearby. Or just sit back and relax. There’s no prettier place to unwind than here in the heart of Route du Vin Wine Country. Crown Pointe Links Each suite sleeps four and includes: * a fully equipped kitchen * Jacuzzi in the master bath * washer and dryer * individually controlled thermostats * hair dryers in all bathrooms * granite vanities * DVD player * stereo Plus, many rooms are equipped with Big Screen TV, and Crown Pointe Links guests are welcome to use all amenities at Crown Pointe Lodge. SPECIAL GRAND OPENING PACKAGES AVAILABLE! Crown Pointe Lodge The three-story Lodge (built only one year ago) includes 48 spacious rooms and throughful amenities including: * indoor pool and hot tub * tennis courts * exercise room * business center and meeting room * free in-room cable with 75 channels including HBO * free in-room Internet access * in-room coffee makers * Suites feature kitchenettes For your comfort the Lodge and Links are both 100% smoke-free, and a complimentary continental breakfast is offered every day. Come To The Heart Of Route du Vin Wine Country, and watch the sun set from your balcony overlooking the lush manicured greens of Crown Pointe Golf Course. Where the fairways stop, pastoral meadows begin, and your view stretches for miles -- to distant wooded hills. Can it get more idyllic than this? Too Many Ways To Have Fun! With so many things to see and do, the only problem is how to fit it all in! CROWN VALLEY - Champagne House Get a behind-the-scenes look (and samples!) at the only Champagne House east of the Rockies. Crown Ridge - Tiger Sanctuary Home of our Big Cat Tiger Sanctuary -- come catch a viewing before they catch you! Be sure to visit our 4-star award winning restaurant also on site. Area Attractions 15 to 30 minutes away: unspoiled rivers, scenic hiking trails, 2,000 acres of premier off-road vehicle riding area, famous battlegrounds, world class scuba diving, more. Plus, one hour from St. Louis’ sports, theater, museums. Crown Pointe Golf Course Championship course designed by Gary Kern again receives 4-star award! Crown Valley Winery To get to the wine tasting area you’ll take an elevated walkway above enormous tanks here at the largest winery in the Midwest! Tiger Ridge Restaurant 5-star dining in a fairy-tale setting on 55-acre estate! Contact Information Summer Bay Resort Midwest Region 100 North Tucker, 10th Floor St. Louis, MO 63101 (314) 558-6140 Main (314) 317-9625 Fax If you do go to an french translation site, is it right? thnx april, i'll be waiting ur answer!

are these facts interesting to you or boring - and pick 3 from here that really had he going 'wow' ? before this weekends Premier League fixtures kick off - here a few I want you to get your head round. is this knowledge useful or boring ? simply answer with either 'useful' or 'boring' for each piece of knowledge i'm about to provide you, all of which is FACTUAL. In the average lifetime, a person will walk the equivalent of 5 times around the equator. There are 318,979,564,000 possible combinations of the first four moves in Chess. Small cockroaches are more likely to die on their backs than large cockroaches. A coat hanger is 44 inches long if straightened. In the last 4,000 years, no new animals have been domesticated. The average American drinks 600 sodas a year. More people are killed annually by donkeys than airplane crashes. A palindrome is a sentence or group of sentences that reads the same backwards as it does forward: Ex: 'Red rum, sir, is murder.' 'Ma is as selfless as I am.' 'Nurse, I spy gypsies. Run!' 'A man, a plan, a canal - Panama.' 'He lived as a devil, eh?' The Pentagon, in Arlington, Virginia, has twice as many bathrooms as is necessary, because when it was built in the 1940s, the state of Virginia still had segregation laws requiring separate toilet facilities for blacks and whites. $203,000,000 is spent on barbed wire each year in the U.S. If one places a tiny amount of liquor on a scorpion, it will instantly go mad and sting itself to death. (Who was the sadist who discovered this??) Scientists have calculated by the Bible and other theological writings, the temperature of hell is 718°C. Mickey Mouse is known as "Topolino" in Italy. All the chemicals in a human body combined are worth about 6.25 euro (if sold separately). Dartboards are made out of horsehairs. Bees have 5 eyes. There are 3 small eyes on the top of a bee's head and 2 larger ones in front. Intelligent people have more zinc and copper in their hair.

Question about Naruto movies? I recall how some Naruto movies, when they were released in theaters in Japan, they came with a movie short. Like I think one was where Naruto tried to compete in a Triathalon but he kept having to use the bathroom so he missed it. Anyway, if you buy the Naruto movies in the U.S., like the dubbed version of it, does it come with the movie short that it premiered with in Japanese theaters? If not, what about the Japanese versions of the Naruto DVD movies, do they come with the movie shorts they premiered with?

Is this a good start to a book? it cut off the end but just views so far? ? I am open to help, criticisms and opinions. Thank you, She ached all over, her feet were bruised and bloody And her brand new pointé shoes were completely ruined. All day she had been practising her pirouettes and leaps, preparing for the show to be held tomorrow evening with an audience of professional ballerinas and dancers to please. Cecilia Haldane had never worked so hard in her life. She could feel the blood pounding through her veins and her toes where so sore she couldn't sense the pain anymore. She finished her final revolution, landed gracefully facing straight ahead and concluded with a bow. She straightened up pleased with the result of the day's wok and slowly drifted over to the barre to stretch and cool down. As she did so, she straddle at herself in the mirror, checking her posture was correct, that her legs looked firm, yet elegant and that her head was not tipped more to one side when she moved her arms. When her heart was back to its natural rhythm and her cheeks were not quite so pink, Cecilia scooped up her cardigan that had been abandon on the floor. She wrapped it around herself and bent to remove her scuffed, satin pointes and bloodstained bandages. She wriggled her toes, attempting to regain feeling and then walked softly com her encephalitis studio to the bathroom go run a hot bath to soak in. She premier away her sweat-soaked leotard and lowered herself into the steaming water. She closed her eyes And breathe in the refreshing aroma of the rose scented bubbles she had added to her bath. She lay there for a little less than a half hour, thinking how lucky she was to have a father that loved her so much that her would build her a room with a grand piano and barre just for her dance practice-in hi on house! Even laying in the bath Cecilia practised her dancing; pointing her toes and extending her arms. She remembered the day she had first set eyes on her dance room: it was Christmas Eve of 1930

Urgent help/advise needed! Seoul,Korea trip in April? Hi, my cousins and i (5 of us) are going to Seoul in mid-end april for about 9 days. Out of the 9 days, we'll be going to Jeju for a 2-day short trip. This whole trip is Free N Easy. And now we are looking for accommodation which is making us go crazy because we just can't decide on the best place/area to stay in. This is our first time to Seoul and we really need your help and kind advise. We really appreciate if anyone of you could help us in this decision making. Here’s for your guidance:- Places we would like to visit in Seoul (not in order) 1. Namsan Park/N Seoul Tower 2. Everland (I think this place takes a whole day) 3. Lotte World (Does it take a whole day?) 4. Namisun Island (Does it take a whole day?) 5. Cheonggyecheon Stream 6. Banpo Bridge (Will most likely check it out during night time. Heard there’s a night tour bus. Has anyone taken it? How was it?) 7. Around Hongik University (For free market, is it worth a visit?) 8.Gyeongbokgung Palace (To witness the changing of guards) 9. Myeongdong (Shopping) 10. Dongdaemun (Night shopping. Heard shop open till morning, is it true?) 11. Itaewon (for Muslim food and to visit the mosque, cousins also want to check out Hard Rock) 12. Ewha Women University (Heard the area selling lots of women clothing. So, likely checking out the place too) 13. Is there a place to try out hanboks? Or get Korean clothing/textile? We’re thinking twice about going to Namdaemun. Because we heard that the area mostly sell clothes for the older generation and nothing much for young adults/teens? Is it true? For accommodation, we would like to stay somewhere with good location whereby we can easily go to the places mention above by subway/walking (save cost on transportation). I think the area we should stay is around myeongdong, dongdaemun or itaewon, which we are having trouble finding a good place. My cousin’s relative also said that if we could find apartment for rental during our stay is good. He actually suggested an apartment in Dongdaemun, near Doota Mall. But he can’t recall what apartment it is. Does any of you know? We found the Han Suites Residences which is located Chung-gu. We thought the location is actually quite ok. From website, they mention that Myeongdong, Dongdaemun and Itaewon are within minutes. How true is that? Also, we planned to take the 1 Bedroom Deluxe (1 bedroom/1 bathroom/1 Hall/1 Kitchenette) but the staff said that there is a company policy that the room is for maximum 2 people. They said, if there’s 5 people, we should take the two bedroom premier which is expensive and also we prefer sleeping in 1 room. Do you think it’s ok to ignore what the staff said and just book the 1 Bedroom Deluxe? Or will there be any problems at the time of checking in? Other than Han Suites Residences, other relatives suggested staying at Hamilton Hotel, in Itaewon. One thing good about Itaewon is maybe because there are many other tourists like us staying around the area, so, it won’t be difficult getting around. But when we saw pictures of the hotel, we were not really impressed. So i’m not sure if it’s a good idea to stay there. They also said that there are a lot of shops there. Are there? Just came across Inside Backpackers (located in Jongro-gu) and saw that they also have kitchenette, though the sleeping area is quite small. Price is good.. but bathroom wise, i’m not too sure. If any of you been there, care to let us know? How about staying at Dongdaemun? Is it a good idea? That’s where the night shopping is right? We did thought about staying at East Gate Hotel but just afraid of the travel time, cost, etc. Cleanliness plays a part in choosing the right place to stay, so appreciate if you can give feedback or suggestions of the best accommodation. Otherwise, which of the ones mentioned above is good to go ahead with? Also, are the places mentioned OK? Or are there any other places which we missed out? Await yours. Thanks a lot!

Can someone please read the first two paragraphs of my short story and give me some feedback? “Before I reveal who the murderer is, let’s go over the details,” Noah said with a devious smile across his face. “The victim, Harry Jennings, was shot twice and killed in this office at about 1:00 PM. According to his secretary, Ms. Brant, Jennings was supposed to meet an actor for his or her audition today. Is that correct Ms. Brant?” “Yes,” she answered quietly, avoiding eye contact. “Ms. Brant did not know if the was male or female, with the only description being that they weren’t not born in this country and were most likely a foreigner. Since this office is on the ninth floor and the half of the elevators are out of order today, the culprit has three options. One, he or she can walk down the stairs, which will take a while. Two-” (If I haven't caught you're attention by this paragraph, please stop reading and tell me what I can fix) “Wait, Noah? Sorry to interrupt, but why didn’t the culprit just take the elevator? It would have been easier to blend in with a huge crowd,” questioned Captain McDonald. “Jennings was shot when they were sitting across from each other, which is about a distance of two feet. From there, some gunshot residue has to be found on the culprits clothes. The gun powder can also leave a stench in his or her clothes, which someone will easily notice in a crowded elevator,” Noah explained. Noah’s detective abilities amazed me. We were both high school seniors and yet he seemed to have intelligence far greater than most world class detectives. “As I was saying before, number two, he or she can blend in at one of the restaurants or stores anywhere above or below this floor. And lastly, he or she can hide in one of the bathrooms or changing rooms and hide the murder weapon and clothes they were wearing when they committed the crime. As you probably all know, the movie The Phantom Slayer is premiering here in San Francisco tonight. I found out later from Inspector Lee that the actors starring in the movie were staying at the Baker hotel, which occupies the twentieth floor and above. This explains the extra police presence and why we were able to find our three suspects. Is that correct officers?” asked Noah. “Yes,” replied the officers simultaneously. “Luckily, I was eating at the restaurant below with my father and John when I heard about this case from Captain McDonald. I immediately asked for the officers to check the identifications of everyone and question all the foreigners that spoke English. According to Ms. Brant, Jennings was looking for a foreigner that spoke English to play a role in his upcoming movie. Our police officers have found three suspects fitting the description. The first one is Lukas Peterson who is here on a business trip. Inspector Lee found him eating at the same restaurant as me, my father, and John. The second is Wakana Takashimi, who claims to be here visiting family members. Inspector St. Clair found her at one of the book stores on twelfth floor. Then there is Fernando Arroyo who Lieutenant Fisher found at a clothing store,” Noah explained. “Wait, Noah? Can’t we just check the script to see what type of ethnicity the character in the movie was?” asked Lieutenant Fisher. “As you can see, there are numerous amounts of movie scripts on his desk and in his cabinets. I’m sure there are roles fitting each one of our suspects,” replied Noah. “Ms. Brant found the body at 1:30 when she was returning from lunch, but she will still be considered a suspect. When I first arrived at the crime scene, I immediately notice that his planner,” Noah said while pointing at a small book with the top page tore out in an evidence bag. “There was blood on the sides of the book, but not on the top page. This meant the culprit removed Jennings’s dying message before escaping. But thanks to forensics, we found out from the indentations on the page beneath that his planner read bring my tux,” said Noah. “So that was his dying message?” questioned Lieutenant Fisher. “Actually, no. He had written that before his meeting with the culprit. I confirmed that with Mrs. Brant. He was having dinner with some friends tonight and that message was to remind Ms. Brant to pick up his tuxedo later.” “But why did the culprit rip out the page if it wasn’t a dying message?” asked Captain McDonald. “Well you see, the culprit shot Jennings once in the body. Before the culprit left, he or she noticed Jennings had a pen in his hand and was attempting to leave a message behind. The culprit shot Jennings again and tore the page from the planner before fleeing.” “Wait, that means-” exclaimed Captain McDonald. “Yes, the culprit is……

Budget hotel in Delhi ? Hotel Raunak is a premier budget hotel located in central delhi. The hotel is known for its quality and timely service. Raunak Plaza Hotel Hotel Description Location : Hotel Raunak Plaza is located near Krishna Market on Saraswati Marg, and is approximately 12-14 km from the Domestic Airport, and 3-5 km from New Delhi Railway Station. Hotel Raunak Plaza is a brand new 3-star hotel that is contemporary and modern, providing guests with comfortable accommodation, along with an array of personalized services and modern facilities, at one of the most central locations in New Delhi: Karol Bagh. Rooms : The 26 air-conditioned rooms at Hotel Raunak Plaza are comfortable and spacious, complete with modern amenities. Rooms are divided into the following categories: Deluxe, Executive and Super Deluxe. In-room amenities include: LCD screen cable television, telephone, balcony/ sit out, Wi-Fi internet access, and an attached bathroom with bathtub and 24 hour hot/cold water. 24 hour room service is available. Dining : Hotel Raunak Plaza has an excellent multi-cuisine restaurant that serves a wide variety of delicious and wholesome dishes all day long, in Indian, Chinese, and Continental cuisines. The hotel also has a 24 hour coffee shop. Facilities : Hotel Raunak Plaza offers a range of facilities and services to its guests, including: fully-equipped conference hall (seats up to 50 persons in theatre style), business centre with secretarial/ fax/ e-mail/ internet facilities, banquet hall, parking facility for 30 cars, travel desk, taxi services, sightseeing tours, laundry services, doctor on call, safe deposit facilities, currency exchange, babysitting service (on request), personal beauty parlour and barber services (on request), and video games for children on request. http://www.hotelraunak.com Hotel Raunak International J.P. Singh 4/38, W. E. A. Saraswati Marg, Karol Bagh New Delhi India 110005

i want to get some sandals but i just cant decide!!? I don't know what i should buy... i was wondering if i should buy a cheap pair.. but how long will that last before it break? then i was considering rainbow sandals.. i asked everyone i know that has rainbow sandals and they all are extremely satisfied. So i went to their website and there are a bunch of categories and i don't know the pros and cons for each thing? I mainly want to use sandals to use in the bathroom and to walk a short distance to class once in a while. which fits me best? Here are the different categories Color Leather Premier Leather Smooth leather Hemp Classics Rubber Sole and each category has signle or double layer >.>

Teen Mom.. MTV SHOW.. question !!!!!!? When 16 and pregnant premiered, there was another girl besides Maci, Farrah, Amber, and Catelynn. Where did that girl go ? She had a really skinny boyfriend.. and she moved in with him and his mom. the up stairs had 2 bedrooms, and a bathroom. I'm so confused ! helpppp!

Miley Cyrus is an amazing artist, why hate on her? Okay so I love Miley Cyrus' song "Can't Be Tamed" and the music video to it! The outfits are amazing, the dance routine is amazing and brilliant! Miley's voice is amazing! I loved how she said one cuss word and she kept it to a PG level! But anyways, why does the Public hate Miley Cyrus? Like seriously I can't even watch the music video on YouTube without getting comments like: 1): She's the next Lindsay Lohan/Britney Spears 2): She's a Lady Gaga/Rihanna/Adam Lambert copycat/wannabe 3): She's a whore who can't sing 4): She shouldn't had done this music video because of the 8 year old kids that look up to her And honestly I am SICK OF IT! Here are some things you guys need to be aware of: Miley Cyrus will be 18 years old, a young adult in November this year she is DONE WITH "Hannah Montana" she finished filming the show last summer. And the pictures that she took for Nick Jonas in the bathroom in 2007/2008, were harmless little pictures that she took for her boyfriend or for Myspace, 12 year old girls are already acting LIKE SLUTS way before Miley came into the picture she had nothing to do with it. Also you guys need to take a look at Lady Gaga and look at her music videos/tours. She's not a little perfect Angel either. She is worse then what Miley has done in her past. I went to her "Fame Monster" Tour couple months ago and Gaga took off her bra in front of perfect strangers. Miley is almost 18 years old now we need to let her breathe or she's gonna have an breakdown just like Britney Spears because she couldn't handle what you guys said about her in the past. Do you guys want that to happen? And the comparisons between Miley Cyrus vs. Selena Gomez vs. Demi Lovato need to stop! All three of them are very different singers with amazing talent that just show it differently then they appear to do. Not everybody is perfect and they can't please you or babysit your kids. If you parents have an issue with Miley being the way she is for her new album PAY ATTENTION TO WHAT YOUR CHILDREN ARE WATCHING! I mean it's not like "Can't Be Tamed" premiered on Disney Channel or something. God!

What do you think of my story so far? Nicholai Fisher was awoken at the ungodly hour of 5 in the morning. The past week had been crazy. She'd been attending movie premiers and after-parties all week long. She'd barely had anytime to sleep.The night before she had come home early and crashed at seven before she had the chance to eat inner. Nicky wondered why the alarm on her blackberry was going off. To her knowledge she had nothing going on today. Nicky threw the covers off of her and reached for the blackberry. The alarm was set at five for a six o'clock photoshoot for Elle Magazine and her agent had been calling her, non-stop, for the past hour. “Hello?” “Oh thank god you picked up,” her frantic manager went off. He rambled on. “Vanity Fair has a last-minute request that you would do an interview with Leo at six tonight. It fits in your schedule, so it's up to you if you want to do it or not.” “Uh, yeah, sure, I'll do it. She nodded even though Connor couldn't see her. “Great, and I'll have the car pick you up in a half hour,” he fasted talked, sounding as if he was having a major caffeine rush. Nicky powered down her phone and threw it on her bed, losing it somewhere in the sheets. After showering and brushing her hair, Nicky picked out her outfit carefully knowing that she would have to do the interview immediately after the shoot. She opted for a form-fitting black v-neck, dark washed skinny jeans and a grey suede jacket that felt good against her skin. In effort to look more sexy, Nicky put on a pair of 3-inch black ankle boots. Nicky still had eleven minutes left before the car would arrive. She gathered her cell phone, some make-up and her wallet and stuffed them all in her small white-leather hobo bag. Nicholai stood in front of her vanity for the last remaining minutes of freedom of the day. She studied her face. She still looked pretty without make-up. She had very thick, dark eyelashes, flawless skin and raspberry lips. In the mist of admiring her own beauty, Nicky heard the car beeping from outside. She ran down the stairs and into the March-Air of Beverly Hills. “Technically, I still have ten minutes,” she said jumping in the car next to Connor. “You're lucky I was ready.” “You're right babydoll,” her charming British agent confirmed. “But if you didn't have ten minutes then you wouldn't have this,” Connor pulled out a large coffee from behind his back. Nicky smiled with delight. “Light and sweet?” “Always.” Nicky grabbed the coffee out of his hand, and took a quick sip, thrilled by the burning sensation on her tongue. For the duration of the car ride Nicky and Connor were completely silent. Nicky gulped her coffee, letting the searing hot liquid burn her throat. Connor sat involved in his iphone. “Put your sunglasses on,” Connor grabbed a backpack as the limo came to a halt. He rushed out of the car, slamming the door shut quickly. Nicky slid her black-out aviators on her face. A ray of camera lights came streaming through Nicholai's vision as the door fell open. She swiftly hopped out of the car and grabbed Connor's arm as they dashed into the St. Regis hotel. The duo were rushed up the elevator by a man in the lobby. They were led to a presidential suite on the tenth floor. The gorgeous room was modernly decorated in charcoals and pastels. Camera and lighting equipment filled the luxurious space as well as a handful of people. “Hi, I'm Erin. It's so nice to meet you Miss Fisher. I'll be assisting you to your photoshoot today,” the petite blonde interrupted Nicky's observations. “Call me Nicky,” She smiled at Erin before whiping her head around to see that Connor was already sitting in a chair texting. “Shall we go to hair and make-up?” Erin offered. Nicky followed her though the suite to the large marble bathroom where hair, make-up and wardobe were set up.” Three complete strangers to Nicky stood at the vanity. ** I was on my third session of hair and make up and my energy was completely drained. We'd gone through two different looks. The first look was a very sexy lingerie look that was definitely not age appropriate but I didn't really care. I belive that I'm older than seventeen. The second look was really edgy and cool. I checked my phone to see that the male model involved in the shot had already texted me his number. I looked up from my phone to see that a tall man stood over me. “I was wondering,” he paused. “if I could get a quick interview with you for the magazine.” I shook my head at all this work that was put into the day. “Sure.” http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AoQccs4b5FwFNYxLGGn6jGjsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20101010063516AALWD97

Is this story I wrote good? This is a story I wrote and I want some feedback on it. Please tell me what you think but don't be really mean because I'm still pretty young and just want some peer feedback. Thanks! My phone vibrated in my pocket; a new text message and I knew exactly who it was and why she was texting me so, I chose to ignore it. I picked up my pen and started to do my home work while my phone kept on buzzing angrily. Soon though, my phone was vibrating so violently my leg started to itch! I picked up my phone and guessed there were about 25 new messages in my inbox. I was off by 5, there were 30. I selected the most recent message and read: To: scar From: nessa Subject: CALL ME!!! SCARLET EMMA DEROSA! IF YOU DO NOT PICK UP YOUR PHONE AND CALL ME RIGHT NOW THEN I WILL CALL ME RIGHT NOW THEN I WILL CALL YOU! AND I KNOW YOUR RINGTONE IS MORE ANNOYING THAN ALL YOUR VIBRATING TEXT MESSAGE JUNK!! Luv, luv, luv, nessa For a minute I considered changing my ring tone but, finally gave in and called Vanessa back, knowing that when I called her she would undeniably squeal into the phone while looking at one her premiering next weekend. Vampire romance websites, because the second movie was A minute later she didn’t disappoint. Vanessa is, to put it quite frankly, obsessed, that is with vampires. Last year she dragged me out to see the first one and I think I about puked when the two lovers kissed. SERIOUSLY! And even though she took me to see it at 11:00 at night and there were some pretty scary\totally gross parts at the end, the image that was stuck in my head for the next month was them kissing. Why do people kiss anyway? Just to break up in a couple weeks? Whatever. My point is that sometimes, Vanessa gets more on my nerves about romance than Logan does with her ideas! Ah Logan. Logan, Logan, Logan. She takes a touch of getting used to. Well, more like a year! But once you are used to her spermatic outbursts and ideas, she’s loads of fun! Once, we shot a water gun out her window and pretended I was going to the bathroom (her sisters were outside, sadly, they didn’t fall for it)! Even though I have polar opposites for best friends, it works out, oddly enough. We get along very well. It was a Sunday, got to hate them; you can’t enjoy them because tomorrow you have to go to school. It’s not that I don’t like school… it’s just not something I look forward to doing. Lunch in the cafeteria is always interesting. There are these jerks of boys who always mutter under their breath about who knows what, I think it’s to each other but they talk so low it’s hard to tell. There is this at least decent looking boy named Bryce, but all the good stuff about their “group” stops there. “Scar, what are you staring at?” Vanessa asked me. “The geeks.” I replied. I always felt like they were staring and talking about me for some weird reason, I probably am totally wrong, but that is what it feels like most of the time. “Oh, come on Scar!” Vanessa said, “There is no point in wasting your perfectly good time by staring at a bunch of weirdo’s.” You see, in Oregon, there is not tons of interesting things that ever happen, so my life is pretty boring. I mean, what rock star is going to say to their agent, “Oh, please take me to Oregon for a concert, it is so neat!” If you said none, you are correct. So actually staring at “them” and following them around did not seem like such a bad idea after school. “Scarlet!” Vanessa said abruptly, “Stop staring at them!” I did what she said, but “they” kept looking over at the table where Nessa, Logan and I were seated. But I forced my self to not look at “them” and turn my attention back to Vanessa and Logan. Right now, Nessa was explaining to practically anyone who would listen, which, at the volume she was speaking at, everyone, even if you didn’t want to hear, about her movie. Logan was sucking a grape into her mouth with such a serious expression, I had to laugh. “Right Scar?” Nessa asked. “What? Uh…yeah!” I replied, thinking that saying yes is always the better way to go. “I knew you would come with me!” Nessa squealed. “To where?” I asked. “To the movie!” Vanessa exclaimed. I take my comment above back and I can not do anything Saturday, I am booked. After school was out, instead of riding the bus home, I decided to walk, get some fresh air; apparently it is good for you. I walked next to the woods beside\near my house and thought I heard something rustle in the bushes beside me. I paused and stopped for a moment, but assumed it was just my imagination and kept walking. Then I heard it again, the same rustle, rustle as I had heard before. Then, whatever was in the bushes shot out and tackled me to the ground. It flipped me over, and after momentarily choking on a particularly nasty clump of dirt, I was able to see what it was. It was a lion, my favorite wild animal, his majestic mane flowing with the breeze. Wait… a lion? In Oregon? Who tackled me?